You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community.However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.In your letter: describe the work you have been doing explain why you can no longer do this work recommend another person who is interested in the work.
Hi Sir or Madam,
I am a citizen of London and live in Manchester. I am a volunteer member of your organization.I am writing a letter of intent not to cooperate with you in the future.
I am a member of the medical team that has been providing dental care to poor people in rural London for many years.My work involved assessing the rate of tooth decay among poor people, repairing tooth decay, and finally reporting to the institute.
You know, I have been waiting for this scholarship for a few years, and now I'm eager to go to the US to get my PhD, and I have to live there for two years.As a result, I miss the honor of working with you for these two years and am really impressed with this.
I was thinking of alternatives for myself and one of my best colleagues working together at the university clinic.He is one of the most experienced dentists I know. He is passionate about volunteering and helping people in need.If you agree, my colleague will come for the interview and you will see what a noble person I have introduced to you.
I thank you for the opportunity you have given me to help people.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible
Yours faithfully,
Daniali
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- You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community.However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.In your letter: describe the work you have been doin 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, really, so, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57013574661 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68337618871 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4920231564 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 4.34317383033 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310683477627 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131310484652 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860307834187 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154274855714 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699867433088 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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