Which should require more financial support from the government? Health or education? To what extend do you agree or not. Use your experience.
development in public sector is important. development includes health and education. Local governments are providing financial support for development. this essay will discuss, where government must have to provide support? and why? therefore, will reach on one conclusion.
To start with, financial support is most important for personal and public growth. government providing founds for education and health. found in education is very good thing which is governments are doing. well educated people is more valuable for country as well as education is important in personal level. In example, educated people have ability to provide good view on many subjects, they are helping in economy development. educated people have very good knowledge in many field.
On the other side, financial support in health is not bad idea. support in health is necessary. government should have to focus more in education compare to health, because educated people have good idea about disease and health related problems. educated people are able to understand real problem and they are able to find solution. educated people have good knowledge of first aid. In example, In road accident educated people will provide very good on site help compare to uneducated people.
In conclusion, education is more important. educated people are able to solution of any problem. governments should have to provide support in education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 20.9802955665 14% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50228310502 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72326868357 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 139.433497537 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474885844749 0.580463131201 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6551724138 158% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.5024630542 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1927302677 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.25 104.977214359 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.95 20.9669160288 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 6.9802955665 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233232145431 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881950250965 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634772922216 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17003674939 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301959586114 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.6 10.9458128079 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.44 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.3980295567 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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