The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activites of Australian children.
The bar graph provides data about the children in Australia who participated in 5 different leisure activities. The units are expressed in percentage.
Overall, the percentage of kids who spent on watching tv or videos was the highest. There were more boys who participated in 5 leisure activities if compared to girls.
Both sexes consumed most of their time on watching tv or videos at about 99%. As for bike riding and playing electronic computer games, it was gatheted that the percentage of boys was close with each other at about 79% and 81%. while the girls were collected almost 20% fewer than the boys. By contrast, for doing art and craft this part girls had a higher percent at no more than 60% of participation while less than 40% for boys. The girl's least selected type of leisure activity was skateboarding or rollerblading wherein between 20% and 30%. Furthermore, the boys who had skateboarding or rollerblading almost leveled the boys doing art and craft.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...e with each other at about 79% and 81%. while the girls were collected almost 20% few...
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Line 9, column 229, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e with each other at about 79% and 81%. while the girls were collected almost 20% few...
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Line 9, column 437, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'girls the least'.
Suggestion: girls the least
...ation while less than 40% for boys. The girls least selected type of leisure activity was s...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95757575758 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83571606179 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4944610665 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0952831784402 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412301793995 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654920805874 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921349118441 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749421531949 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.