Your friend has asked you to help him/her to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell:
-what experience the teacher has
-why you think he/she is suitable
-how to get in touch with the teacher.
Dear Jane,
I hope this letter finds you in best of your health. You will be delighted to know that I have found a professional music teacher for Suzy here in our town. Now she can learn the art of singing without any hassle.
The name of the teacher is Mr.Radhe Krishnan, he has been teaching music at the National University for the last 10 years. He is not only a proficient classical singer but also an experienced instructor. Moreover, he was also honoured with the President award for best teacher in 2016.
According to me, Mr.Krishnan is best for Suzy because of various reasons. Firstly, he is a classical singer and Suzy is extremely profound of this kind of music and will definitely love it. Secondly, he takes classes on weekends also, which I suppose the most convenient time for you and your daughter, considering your sedentary life.
For more information, I am attaching the visiting card of the teacher you can contact him directly. Also, you can refer my name to him, as I already had a talk with him regarding this.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours loving,
Prabh
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| 2019-11-26 | enassar | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 31, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Radhe
...sle. The name of the teacher is Mr.Radhe Krishnan, he has been teaching music at...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...t award for best teacher in 2016. According to me, Mr.Krishnan is best for Suzy because o...
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Line 13, column 21, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Krishnan
...cher in 2016. According to me, Mr.Krishnan is best for Suzy because of various rea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, i suppose, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.796875 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61835717022 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8532001706 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8461538462 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333438763569 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112777133 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707298983501 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178095788488 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601976093706 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.