Topic: as well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree

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Topic: as well as making money, business also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree

It is no doubt true that profit-oriented organizations should also have social obligations besides generating revenues. Although cash flow plays a crucial role in business operations, social issues are also equally important.

On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why enterprises attempt to maximize profits. Firstly, if companies raise more money, prosperous and developed firms also create more jobs for the locality, which leads to the reduction of the jobless rate. For example, as an international corporation such as Coca Cola tends to scale up over the world, which reduces problems relevant to unemployment and poverty. Secondly, when the annual growth of businesses, they can meet the demand of paying taxes for the government. This makes the government can allocate these revenues for building infrastructure as well as providing instant subsidization to needy people.

On the other hand, there are some crucial factors why businesses should accept that they have responsibilities for society. In terms of environmental effects, many industrial activities are believed to cause adverse impacts on the environment, typically is the disposal of industrial wastes, giving rise to sea level recently. For instance, instead of releasing chemical wastes to rivers, they could establish the drainage system result in mitigating water pollution. Another reason is that corporations, even though they are either big or small, should conduct charitable activities and sponsor scholarship in order to enhance the well-being of citizens. In this case, they not only improve the living standard of the impoverished but also enhance their public images; it is such a win-win partnership.

In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I hold my initial view that companies should maintain their business activities and social responsibilities at the same time.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56097560976 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09517904209 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2796581667 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15224871339 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049767523454 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481224830293 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100482498546 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484068581419 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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