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The author of the statement stated that some belives that corporation should do something for the well being of the societies and environment as they think it is their responsibility, while others believe that they should do their work i.e to make money but within the countries laws. Many of us will argue that it will hold all the time while others will counter this by providing examples. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the statement and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
Corporations are the backbones of a countries economy as a country receives most of its money through the cooperate tax. Corporations are not only contributed as the major player in the country GDP but also provide jobs to a large number of population, For example, in India just behind the Indian Railways, it is TATA groups of companies that provide jobs to maximim number of Indians. So, In a way, they are contributing to the societies in the form of employment.
Moreover, there are many fields in they can contribute to the well-being of societies, for example, they provide free education to unprivileged children or they provide free medical checkups to those who cannot afford the expensive medical test. And, If look at the country like India, where more than 33 percent of the population living under poverty, there are a lot of opportunities for the cooperation to do for their well-fare. But there are small cooperations also whose turnover is not that much or not having amply of capital to invest in the social well-fare program. But what they can do is take care of the environment by producing very less not degradable waste or by lower down the emission of CFC gases.
But we cannot comply them to do so as they are bind by any law like this. It totally depends upon the wish of the top executives or Boards of directors to take initiative to do good for the societies.
In sum, we can say that the cooperations are doing something for the well-fare of society by providing jobs or by contributing to the GDP of a country, but they are not forbidden by the law to do so.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... Corporations are the backbones of a countries economy as a country receives most of i...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ntry receives most of its money through the cooperate tax. Corporations are not only contribu...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he country GDP but also provide jobs to a large number of population, For example, in India just ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lower down the emission of CFC gases. But we cannot comply them to do so as th...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r down the emission of CFC gases. But we cannot comply them to do so as they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68733153639 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72908355782 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4361411714 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.769230769 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5384615385 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.243740707755 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0831039109588 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150359130593 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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