Tourism has increasingly so much over the last 50 year that is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion
In today’s world, it becomes a controversial topic that increased tourist across the last 50 years produce basically negative impact on local habitant or create benefit economy sector. Some might have limited view about the advantages and disadvantages of both or do not have courage to claim tourism be able support the economy. While several people believe that amount of tourism which a rise was the biggest scourge of environmental damage involve society inside. Both sides will be discussed, carefully
On the one hands, tourism which increased significantly actually has several advantages to economy sector un the future. Firstly, the population was able added income to completely daily needs. Specifically in a tourism which located in remote area. Because be able to reduce joblessness. Secondly in developed countries such as Indonesia bring benefit the tendency to have a long life expectancy. Moreover contained demographics condition, local inhabitants be able prosperous. In term their establish innovations in tourism sector
On the other hands, the population need take a risk the growth of tourism. Their might damage environment and has bad influence to society. It is due to each building a new tourism that signify contamination the biosphere for instance not only damage environment but effect clout to culture society such as in Sumba, East Nusa Tenggara. Development of tourism in their threat sustainability of Ritual and Cultural norms. However be able solved with to preserve the culture and tradition with local society
To sum up, personally I do not agree that tourism become the biggest cause destruction environment and habitant I prefer trust that tourism which saw a rise contribute positive impact to economy sector in the country. That was produced opportunity local people has better livelihood with good economic prospects. However it depends on inhabitant and government decision in elected way manage tourism in a country to support tourism development or suppress growth to avoid negative effect
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ivelihood with good economic prospects. However it depends on inhabitant and government...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48895899054 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92265803037 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4998825187 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282365669168 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807698487945 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577766376186 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169508923129 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579085771268 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.