Tourism has increasingly so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinions.
Apparently, economic sector has been significantly increasing since five years ago. One of the main reason is coming from the developing of tourism sector which have been continuously rose over 50 years. However, several people assume that it can be influenced on the local environment and inhabitants, because most the tourism places are natural lands but in my opinion it will have a lot of beneficial than disadvantage for some reasons.
It is very good strategies to encourage economic growth of region or country by promoting their tourism place. Because it is will influence on the capital income of local people, product sells and community. For the example in Bali Indonesia, there are many tourism places such as beach, and resort with beautiful view that crowded by foreign visitors where the city is becoming the top three in big financial income in Indonesia. It was because the local citizen can have huge access for selling their local product or services to the visitors. In addition, it can be seen clearly that tourism have biggest potential and it has been real for growing profit and business.
Growing the tourism sector also have side effect to the environment. Firstly, it will influence on animal habitants because expanding the tourism place can take much places and change the natural land. For the example, large of forest have been cut to be resort and villa, which were over 100 birds die because they lost their home and natural habitats. In addition, problem of water pollution also have increased by the effect of growing many tourism places, in which a lot of tourist bought plastic bag or bottles and throwing it to the beach. Therefore many corals and little fish are damaged. None of this would have been possible without government and citizen support.
However, there are many consequences about increasing the tourism places, it still needs to support for better development of tourism sector. The sustainable development should be achieved to ensure the excellent result and encourage the economic growth.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10416666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57390065254 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550595238095 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8241069154 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.1875 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257423031778 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852105421694 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555121129312 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165923668874 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335072118442 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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