Nowadays people spending too much time at work to an extent that they hardly have any time for their personal life. Discuss.
In this competitive world, one needs to work hard to survive, to fulfill needs and expectation of own as well as family. In accomplishment of needs one cannot live their personal life fully and they spent their most of the time at work. I will discuss advantages and disadvantages of spending too much time at work in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with reason why people spending their most of the time at work. Nowadays massive recession going on in all industry due to US and China War. Due to this most of the organization behind the cost cutting, so if the person is not performing well or adding value to the organization they terminate them immediately. In a way they are reducing manpower cost. For example, in one of multinational company in Vadodara has cut their manpower cost by 50% even if their production on selling go on higher side so existing employee got overloaded and they spend most of their time to accomplish given task and they do not enjoy their personal life due to work stress.
On the contrary part, organization should think on work life balance of their employee. There are numerous benefits of spending quality time for personal life. For example if organization reduce their working days, 5 days a week then people can spend 2 days for personal life.
In conclusion, spending too much time at work lead many issues health, family etc. Both are equally important for to survive in this competitive world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84337349398 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71359966969 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558232931727 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6449099003 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495452372918 0.242375264174 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180443466729 0.0925447433944 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117052902271 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303572159152 0.151781067708 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487810109538 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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