People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This have made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is an incontrovertible fact that today's life has become more materialistic than past time. The needs of people have risen and they have bought new things everyday for enjoy the comfort in their life. However, they have lost their traditions and culture because of it. This essay partially agree with this notion and rendered my view points in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why new things have effecting on traditional values. The first is that today's people are living in modern era and they believe if they do not have latest gadget and fashionable clothes they do not have identity. As well as, they are not accepting in social circles and get not respect from their peer. Moreover, the relationship between the masses are rooting with social frame. For example, they have not time to spend with their family members which creates the relationship barrier between the parents and children. They are not respect to their parents as well as, they have no knowledge related to their culture and traditions. In that way, they are forget the ritual and moral values.
On the other hand, in this face paced era mobs are doing hard work in their life. They want to live comfortable so, they are buying the many of new gadgets which complete their work in few seconds and with the safety. However, not all the people lose their culture due to this gadgets. There are so many successful people who, maintain a fine balance between all aspects of life. To instance, Mukesh Ambani who has one of richest person and they have the many type of technical gadgets. But, he has respect in his mind for their country family and tradition.
In conclusion, the traditional culture and adapting new things both are important for people. They want to make a balance between in things because if they would forget their tradition they would lose their identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
It is an incontrovertible fact that todays life has become more materialistic than...
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Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...life has become more materialistic than past time. The needs of people have risen and the...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e risen and they have bought new things everyday for enjoy the comfort in their life. Ho...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the latest'.
Suggestion: have the latest
...ern era and they believe if they do not have latest gadget and fashionable clothes they do ...
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Line 5, column 702, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'forgotten'.
Suggestion: forgotten
...e and traditions. In that way, they are forget the ritual and moral values. On th...
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Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ll the people lose their culture due to this gadgets. There are so many successful p...
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Line 9, column 420, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the richest'.
Suggestion: of the richest
... To instance, Mukesh Ambani who has one of richest person and they have the many type of t...
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Line 9, column 456, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
...one of richest person and they have the many type of technical gadgets. But, he has respe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85230769231 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3759026936 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504615384615 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.032900556 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78947368421 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206906484531 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753669000928 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501894999837 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145018165729 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855962227852 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.