Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?”

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free.

Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?”

Some museums charging people for entrance, but there is another museums don’t imposing admission fee. in this essay we will shows advantages and disadvantages of both methods.

First, charging people for entering museums is discourage them and keep them way from these places, espeacially the youngest, which is the most targeted audience because they must be aware about the national history from a young age, and it can reduse the number of turist to the historical places ,Furthermore, museums are funded by government from people taxes, and it can get more money from other investment like rental shops for others, restaurant and gifts shop, for illustrate, museums have another ways to be funding rather than charging vistors.

In the other hand, museums have a lot of fixed costs like salery, manitanence, and external exhibtions it weighing heavily it budget and not all museums are funded from the governmant and if even they are, in most time it will be not enugh to cover all it expenses, especilly big museums costs a lot of money for maintening and it will keep them able to offering a good service.

In conclusion, admission charge will help museums to keep them in good condition, but it may causing to reduce the number of visitors and turists, but free entrance has a lot of benifet in short time than the monetary ticket method it can help museums to benefit from it resorces.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00421940928 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58292647891 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561181434599 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 177.645039334 49.4020404114 360% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.2 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.4 20.7667163134 228% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339731339236 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201491999645 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122709517608 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224319741577 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982368031179 0.056905535591 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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