Some people think that men and women have different qualities. therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some job are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
some people claim that various types of jobs require different description. Thus, some particular jobs suit men and some suit women. however I strongly disagree with the given notion and I will give my opinion in following paragraphs.
on the one hand, women are turning to the jobs and businesses. Due to globalisation there are no major differences between a job done by men and women. In short, women nowadays do most of the work as an employee in any jobs. A good example of this is family business, which could be run by family. Woman who is handling family business and even a house as a housewife altogether. As a consequences, employment rate of women in any jobs is rising day by day.
On the other hand, there are some particular jobs, which required certain gender. Jobs which need some physical strength and strong mentality such as an army. Which can only done by a men. In contrast, women are quite emotional and as per their caring nature, they are best suitable gender for child care and as a nurses. Furthermore this types of certain works cannot be done by any other gender.
to recapitulate, I re-iterate my views that it can be seen that women and men both are capable of having same careers. Ability to do certain jobs is important rather than focusing on gender identity. Societies should provide better opportunities to every individual and should not be evaluated by their gender instead of their capabilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, in contrast, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82329317269 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70546245666 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586345381526 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3999056305 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6470588235 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361275875926 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106856930258 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910801922315 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207279831252 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690262275683 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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