In recent society, more and more people are trying to live by their own. Is this a positive or a negative trend? What is your opinion and share your personal experiences?
A growing number of people choosing a solitary lifestyle, in recent society. This has both advantages and disadvantages. While, there are pros like responsibility, confidence and maturity in gained by living alone, the corns such as financial burden and isolation cannot be neglected. So I completely disagree with this type of arrangement.
To begin with, a person who is living alone will learn to do things on his own because there is no one to share the responsibilities. For instance, doing daily household chores, paying tax or home repairs, the person has to do by himself. This will make him more responsible, confident and mature. Additionally, being a loner means having complete freedom to live the way he wants while family living may not give the relaxed way of life. Everything may have to be shared, like the room, dining, television. This type of inconvenience will not be there in the sole living, and so there is ultimate freedom and enjoyment of ‘no need of sharing’ whether it is the TV time or the personal space.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages for this type of living arrangement. Firstly, the financial burden falls solely on the person whereas in case of family living it is divided among the members depending on the earning they make. From my personal experience, at the time when my father was in financial struggle, I could offer him the help that was much needed. Moreover, the people living alone will have to fight with loneliness and boredom. Without another person to communicate it will be difficult to live. In the beginning it might seem privileged to get the chance to lead life alone, but in the long run, this arrangement is tough to cope up.
To conclude, even though, in the sole living arrangement loner may learn his life’s lessons like, responsibility, confidence and maturity, financial burden and isolation will break the person badly. This makes it clear that such living is not good for a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, while, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98208955224 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8728392948 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564179104478 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2219982074 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7222222222 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181074294913 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619748151199 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373663507869 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113800516852 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147417962064 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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