One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
apologise for missing the birthday celebration
explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend
and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry
Dear Marry,
How are you? hope this letter finds you in good health. I hope you have enjoyed your birthday party at its full and not mad at me for missing it.
I would first like to sincerely apologize for not attending your birthday party. I was eagerly waiting for this time, moreover, I had a surprising plan for you.
But as you know, I am working on a project for the past couple of months and this project has made me experience a lot, since it was a tough project. so as usual, I was in the lab and testing something where to my surprise, the Robot stopped working and I became so anxious because the deadline was two days ahead. so I straight went to my supervisor's place to discuss the problem with him. In this tense scenario, I just forgot to make a call to inform you. Otherwise, I had made a day off on your birthday to celebrate.
my apologies once again, and to make you feel happy, I have booked a dinner at the BBQ Tonight on this weekend. I will wait for you there. hope you will come. See you there.
Warm Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Dear Marry, How are you? hope this letter finds you in good health. I...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... for not attending your birthday party. I was eagerly waiting for this time, more...
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Line 11, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ce a lot, since it was a tough project. so as usual, I was in the lab and testing ...
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Line 11, column 316, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ecause the deadline was two days ahead. so I straight went to my supervisors place...
^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ff on your birthday to celebrate. my apologies once again, and to make you f...
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Line 15, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...his weekend. I will wait for you there. hope you will come. See you there. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3216080402 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32118380252 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4334189288 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4285714286 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324909739871 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115826750517 0.0766984524023 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723498550229 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215060859742 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685106994061 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.