To friend for apology
Dear Mark,
I hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. If you recall, last week we went out for family holidays, for which I borrowed your camera, but by mistake it got broken.
First of all, I would like to tell you about Mt. Abu where we stayed for 3 days. Actually, last week my daughter had her birthday and she was very excited to make her day special. So, we planned for this trip. When we reached there, it was raining but atmosphere and the surrounding ambience was really pleasant.
However, on the last day, we were at the sun set point. It was crowded and was drizzling as well. The place where we were standing was slippery. While I was filming the sun set, I got a push from behind and I fell down and the camera also banged on the rocks. I panicked and tried to check whether the camera was working or not. I was very upset when I saw that the lens was broken.
As soon as we returned home, I took the camera to the service center and asked them if it was repairable. They denied but can replace the whole lens. I have already paid for it and the camera would be back with in a week.
I apologize for this and I hope it won’t affect our friendship.
Your’s lovingly,
Bhavanesh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, really, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38626609442 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26212423705 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605150214592 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9854138973 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.1176470588 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7058823529 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123558451506 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429284173064 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073499602702 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848222211066 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857208202161 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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