Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company, while others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is certainly true that the experience of an individual is one of the major criteria for an employer to run a successful business. According to some people, well-established candidates are essential for a company. However, others feel youngsters can do the same amount of work in less time with a great end result. I feel that the success of a company is based on the comprehensive support of both young and old employees. In the following paragraphs, let me walk you through the arguments from both sides and conclude with my opinion.
On the one hand, some people believe that senior employees are the backbone of an employer. First and foremost, they feel that the elder workers have vast experience and thorough knowledge in the field that they work, which most of the times helps the employers to overcome the unexpected crisis. In addition to this, they think that these candidates can play as a trainer for a fresher and mentor them when the fresh candidates require help for completing difficult tasks. Overall, the old employees can be more supportive of a firm to sustain in the market in the long run.
On the other hand, another group of people believes that young aspirants are more productive and can provide various benefits for the employer. In other words, they feel that young employees are enthusiastic and always prepared for new challenges. A recent survey by the MBA students of IIM, for instance, shows that the employees aged between 25 and 35, have a better productive percentage and spent less time to complete a project than the employees above 35 years of age. This clearly shows the significance and contribution of the young workers for the employer. However, I feel that experienced candidates are a great resource for a company and if they work along with the youngsters, they can elevate their company's profile to the topmost level.
In conclusion, though the people have a different opinion about the contribution by the young and old employees for their employer, I feel the real success can be achieved in this competitive world only with the aid of both young and elderly employees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77347991179 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515235457064 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8323974681 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215218534707 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795954465134 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070773031479 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139247966466 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321444246025 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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