In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is true that the number of people suffering from obesity is increasing and thus the health and welfare of people are decreasing. Although there will unquestionably be some prime causes of this trend, measures cold certainly taken to mitigate these potential problems.
As the average weight of people is climbing, several related causes and effects can be anticipated. First and foremost it could be argued that technological improvements could possibly lead people to have a more motionless lifestyle. It would appear that there is a wide range of electronic devices such as washing machine, dishwasher, drying machine and other kitchen processors which allow shortening the time and effort significantly in order to do housework. Viewed from this angle, these tools are an essential part of our daily life that the majority of the people cannot think themselves apart from these devices, in this case, they are most likely to do fewer activities that may bring about several health problems especially obesity. Another important reason could be thought that an increasing number of unhealthy food usage would probably be the primary reason for the deterioration of people’s health. It is obvious that fast food including all the processed food and fizzy drinks suck as sausage, chips, sweetened drinks contain a vast amount of sugar, carbohydrate, cholesterol, calories and detrimental fat which increase the risk for health problems such as high blood pressure, heart disease or stroke and obesity.
There are several actions that not only the government but also the people themselves could take to resolve the problems depicted above. Initially granted, it could be asserted that spend more active life by reducing some devices and car usage should definitely help people to lose more calories and become healthier. Another measure could be considered that consuming healthier food suck as a vegetable, grain, and fruit might refrain people from serious diseases mentioned above.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as an increasing weight problem of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
... argued that technological improvements could possibly lead people to have a more motionless l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, thus, apart from, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36904761905 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73244759168 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2670705993 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.333333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310046059636 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115876859422 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512542405946 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199289107084 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353682064412 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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