A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
DEAR TOM,
HELLO BUDDY, HOW are you? AS you MAY have GUESSED it AFTER THE LONG CONVERSATION you HAD WITH my parents, my parents have PERMITTED me TO VISIT YOUR PLACE.you will BE HAPPY TO HEAR that I have BOOKED TICKETS AND will BE REACHING ON 10TH OF OCTOBER.NOW that I am FINALLY COMING TO YOUR PLACE, there are A FEW THINGS that I wanted TO ENQUIRE about.
BUT BEFORE that I wanted TO ASK FOR THE KIND OF TOKEN OF LOVE,you would like TO RECEIVE.SINCE you have always HAD THIS FASCINATION FOR OUR TRADITION AND CULTURE,I was thinking TO BRING some SHOWCASES WHICH REPRESENT THE SAME.PLEASE LET me know if there is SOMETHING ELSE that would like TO have FROM HERE.
AS you know I have always been VERY restricted about carrying LUGGAGE WHILE TRAVELLING.so wanted TO ENQUIRE ON WHAT LEISURES are WE GOING TO have there.I will carry my STUFF ACCORDINGLY.ALSO if you are PLANNING FOR A HIKING OR some ADVENTURE SPORT, KINDLY INFORM PRIORILY so I carry my TEKKING KIT ALONGWITH me.IN ADDITION TO this I was thinking TO carry some WINTERWEAR WITH me.HOW is THE WEATHER there? have PEOPLE started WEARING SWEATERS OR JACKETS?
LASTLY I am CONCERNED about THE EATERIES AVAILABLE IN YOUR REGION.I have always been restricted TO ORGANIC FRUITS AND VEGETABLES.so will it BE EASILY AVAILABLE? OR SHOULD I carry THEM ALONG WITH me?
I know you MIGHT have HAD this THOUGHT that I have started BEING so NERVOUS about this TRIP.that is BECAUSE OF THE FACT that this is my FIRST INTERNATIONAL TRIP.SORRY FOR BOTHERING you so MUCH.AWAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE.
REGARDS
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...GS that I wanted TO ENQUIRE about. BUT BEFORE that I wanted TO ASK FOR THE ...
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Line 13, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...ted TO ASK FOR THE KIND OF TOKEN OF LOVE,you would like TO RECEIVE.SINCE you have al...
^^^^
Line 13, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ASCINATION FOR OUR TRADITION AND CULTURE,I was thinking TO BRING some SHOWCASES WH...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that would like TO have FROM HERE. AS you know I have always been VERY rest...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “AS” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uld like TO have FROM HERE. AS you know I have always been VERY restri...
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Line 21, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...HAT LEISURES are WE GOING TO have there.I will carry my STUFF ACCORDINGLY.ALSO if...
^
Line 21, column 406, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...RWEAR WITH me.HOW is THE WEATHER there? have PEOPLE started WEARING SWEATERS OR JACK...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arted WEARING SWEATERS OR JACKETS? LASTLY I am CONCERNED about THE EATERIES...
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Line 29, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...t THE EATERIES AVAILABLE IN YOUR REGION.I have always been restricted TO ORGANIC ...
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Line 33, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...SHOULD I carry THEM ALONG WITH me? I know you MIGHT have HAD this THOUGHT t...
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Line 37, column 101, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: Because
...EING so NERVOUS about this TRIP.that is BECAUSE OF THE FACT that this is my FIRST INTERNATIONAL TRIP.SOR...
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Line 37, column 194, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...AL TRIP.SORRY FOR BOTHERING you so MUCH.AWAITING FOR YOUR RESPONSE. REGARDS
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, if, lastly, may, so, while, in addition, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72856404147 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.056657798 44.8134815571 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.875 76.5299724578 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.75 16.8248392259 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.25 4.34317383033 282% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246956958757 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107061054295 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621933005861 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146487620002 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459649728109 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 8.37731958763 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 41.2886597938 186% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.