In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
There is no denying that people in industrialized countries are more likely to lengthen their life span. This situation result in a host of adverse outcomes for both individual and society as a whole and several feasible solutions can be implemented to mitigate the potential problems.
There are many reasons why several related issues of the increase in old population can be anticipated. One of primary causes is that the financial burden on national budget would be greater since governments need to pay much more money as pension and welfare for the elderly, which results in insufficient fund for other priorities such as education or infrastructure. Another contributing factor is that the shortage of labor force on working population because the proportion of young working adults is significantly smaller, thus, this situation brings several negative impact on productivity and economic development. Furthermore, the demand for healthcare and medical service will rise gradually as the aging are vulnerable and at higher risk of getting diseases. Therefore, young family members will have to sacrifice their time to look after their elderly relatives, which affect to the budget of them.
However, there are some possible measures can be taken into consideration to tackle this problem. Firstly, a simple approach is that government should increase the retirement age because people of this age are likely to be healthy enough to continue their working life. As a consequence, they receive more income, that will reduce the financial burden and tackle the issue of labor force. Another answer is that governments need to encourage people to have more children and immigration from developing countries in order to increase the number of young adult workforce in the future. Japan, a renowed country for attracting the young in developing countries such as Vietnam, Laos or Cambodia, is a typical example.
To sum up, governments should have prompt and appropriate methods to keep balance for the society and alleviate the outcomes caused by this phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39877300613 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89941564597 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.7907716072 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.384615385 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236902791839 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781555090018 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546174497936 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137009930376 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352411328123 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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