The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017.
The given bar chart reveals the age groups in Northern Ireland who attended the emergency department at a hospital in december 2016 and december 2017.
Overall, it can be observed that the oldest age group and the youngest age group had taken the majority population who attended emergency care in both periods. Other age groups, on the other hand, had small populations of attendance to emergency care compare to former groups.
To begin with, the age group who had attended to emergency care most is by far the aged 75 and over (between 60,000 and 70,000 people) in both december 2016 and december 2017. As well as this, the youngest group (under age 5) had taken up the second-biggest number of emergency patients (50,000 to 60,000 people) in both periods.
To my surprise, there are similar numbers of attendance in emergency care between aged 16-44 and aged 65-74 around 30,000 to 35,000 people in these periods while the aged 5-15 had taken up the smallest number of emergency patients at only 20,000 to 25,000 people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, well, while, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01142857143 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45809948156 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525714285714 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6788304968 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.166666667 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386321774159 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.244547846375 0.103423049105 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193910113107 0.0843802449381 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301441514151 0.15604864568 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.201158131495 0.0819641961636 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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