Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
every person have their own views and opinion towards a certain topic. After listening their view the younger ones develops their opinions which are sometimes influenced by the some other person. Generally the younger people opinions are influenced by either celebrities including all the famous entertainer, athletes etc or by the older people. In my opinion the younger people opinions are influenced by the opinions of celebrities because of the following reasons which i will eradicate in the following passage.
The first reason that strike mind is that celebrities are famous and have many died hard fan follower. All the fans of those celebrities try to copy the celebrities that they follow and try to do all the actions which they performed. they even try to copy every little actions which they performe.And most of the fans are younger people and their opinions greatly influenced by the celebrities which they follow. For example If some cricketer which large fan base enters into the politics and start supporting some party the all the fan of that cricketer will also start supporting that party. that why all the political parties try to have some celebrities face so that they can get more votes during the election time.
In addition to that all the celebrities are expert in their field. so they have all the real knowledge related to their field to its root compared to an older person. every younger person wants to follow the opinion of an expert rather than a non expert. For example my friend ram all wants to become a badminton player and want to represent india on a global stage. he is die-hard fan of P.V sindhu and follow her. he listen all the advise which she give related to badminton and consider all his opinion. But he did not any advise seriously from the older ones as they are not expert in that field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
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...der all his opinion. But he did not any advise seriously from the older ones as they a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85534591195 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45115246606 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471698113208 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6666442169 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193543372096 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722335732659 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550318946697 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139750290204 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376527624799 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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