Modern technology has brought about changes in the roles of men and women. Discuss some of these changes. Do you think these changes have been beneficial?
Nowadays, nobody doubts that technology has revolutionized human life. The impossible has turned to be possible and human's quality of life has improved drastically. technology has had a deep impact on every aspect of our lives so that the traditional role of men and women has been touched by its magic. I believe that technology has made males and females equal in regard to their socio-economical value in modern societies.
The mile stone for modern world is industrial revolution, when technology stepped in and replaced the manual labor force with machines. before this time, productivity of a society solidly relied on human work force, especially on fields, farms, workshops, small family running factories, and local businesses. men had the primary role in all these economical activities and women had to take the supporting roles. they mainly did household duties, brought up children, and prepared foods for the family, while giving helping hands to the men of family for handling the family economy.
By the beginning of the age of machines, agriculture became an industry, limited businesses turned to large and international ones, and small factories were replaced by huge factories. The large scale production led to urging demand for workforce. women started to be considered as fresh troops to this advancing frontier. Therefore, they were pulled out of houses and encouraged to take the positions which were formerly known as manly jobs. machines took the place of men in a wide variety of works. Consequently, there had to be educated men and women who could run these machines, maintain them, upgrade them, and supervise their efficiency.
Moreover, technology has made our lives rather easier. For example, refrigerators keep food stuffs fresh, ovens shorten the cocking time, laundry machine wash any kind of clothes efficiently, and automobiles rush us into our work places. Thus, women can have out-of-the house career without being limited by housekeeping chores.
Despite the still existing gender discrimination, today women have more hectic and prolific lives than before. technology facilitates living and at the same time provide many job opportunities for both genders. men are not anymore the dominant in economy and women are not just the housekeeping maids. In my opinion, technology has reduced gender-based model of life in modern societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39466666667 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87286028589 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634666666667 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.09806573 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177791908227 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484885003559 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04363000848 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939799879526 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298365427924 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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