It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
In olden days, people had less knowledge about the things around him. As years passed, he began to ponder over how, when and why the surroundings exists and started creating new things and passed on this kind of information to the younger generations. such is the history of development. To create something innovative, it requires the knowledge of not one field but also different fields. Hence, I concur that it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Educational institutions, knowing the growing demand of industry, frames the curriculum in such a way that students have diverse knowledge in various aspects of their course of study. Further, students have the option of choosing the required courses as an elective. that is the reason why engineers study physics, chemistry, mathematics and english in the first year of their study. also, they must learn about environmental science as an optional paper. Without such education, an engineer will be useless.
Furthermore, the mobile phones, laptops and different communication objects that we encounter in our daily life are not created based on a single field of study whereas it requires the knowledge of a spectrum of thought processes. A rocket propulsion requires the knowledge of physics in order to know the projectile, mathematics knowledge is needed to calculate the size, shape and distance whereas knowledge of chemistry is required to know the chemical composition and english is the tool of communication.
Moreover, a biologist will be able to appreciate the beauty of the colors signified by the pathogens represented by red color attacking the blood cells represented by green color if he had prior knowledge about the aesthetic value of an art. Nevertheless, an artist or a musician specializes in one specific aspect as it is more than necessary for his profession.
To put in a nutshell, it an be summarized that the profession of a person decides whether that individual should be strong in one specific subject or many academic subjects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding things'?
Suggestion: the surrounding things
...n days, people had less knowledge about the things around him. As years passed, he began to ponder ov...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...information to the younger generations. such is the history of development. To creat...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ng the required courses as an elective. that is the reason why engineers study physi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...glish in the first year of their study. also, they must learn about environmental sc...
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Line 17, column 26, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ofession. To put in a nutshell, it an be summarized that the profession of a ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ofession. To put in a nutshell, it an be summarized that the profession of a per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22848664688 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9919103037 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3766223789 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333241599865 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110170031434 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216033885695 0.0737576698707 293% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172953078403 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136780834146 0.0645574589148 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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