Some say that in today's world the value of humanities has been eclipsed by the necessity of preparing for specific wealth-producing careers, such as medicine. Discuss whether you think there is a role in today's changing world for the study of the humanities.
Nowadays, global climate change has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the word, which leads to a moot question "what are the positive and negative consequences?". it is a widely held view that a rise in temperature is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must carefully weigh up the pros and cons of atmospheric condition.
From a social point of view, geographical areas are indeed bound to the climatology, which means it might lead to both the temperature zones and ice cap melting. For example, a group of profound environmentalist, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between catastrophic floods and weather condition as well as the dessert area. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the connection that coastal cities are positively correlated with not only the earth's atmosphere but also dry season.
In geological terms, global warming is undoubtedly attributable to water circle, in that it would lead to meteorologist, the local ecosystem, and climate change. A well-known example of such attributions is the thermal radiation, which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken in taking water pollution for granted. Had it done the earth quack in advance, it might have had the opportunity to do a fierce typhoon. thus, the arid desert could play a significant role in the tropical climate.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that the general warming effect must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some seeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
- Information revolution has changed the way of mass communication and had some negative effects on individual lives as well on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- The only thing that interferes my learning is my education-Einstein. Discuss the statement and give your opinion. 88
- Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing, skydiving, bungee jumping or not. What are the reasons for that? 79
- Successful sports and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do you support it or not. 80
- In most of the education systems, students are assessed by written examinations. Do you think it is a good idea or not? Give your reasons 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...adays, global climate change has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...itive and negative consequences?'. it is a widely held view that a rise in te...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...positively correlated with not only the earths atmosphere but also dry season. In...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...the opportunity to do a fierce typhoon. thus, the arid desert could play a significa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41635687732 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26929639916 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672862453532 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5265664103 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.454545455 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745420590694 0.242375264174 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236161680151 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355091814635 0.071462118173 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0381330344116 0.151781067708 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233195210268 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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