People in today's world have become too dependent on automobiles.
Cars are highly important in today’s world as one of the main sources of transportation. This is most noticeable in American cities and other first countries around the world. Personally. I agree that today’s society has become too dependent on automobiles. I will explain in the following essay.
To start with, in American cities cars are the main form of transportation. Since the 1960s when car industries started to flourish, the family car has become the number one choice of commute for American families. American’s love the independence their cars give them. In addition, cars offer a sense of independence that public transportation cannot offer. In America most cities are spread out, their roads, streets and highway system is designed to increase the number of cars used. Is not usual for many people to have to commute an hour or so to work every day,
Secondly, in America cars do not only use to commute but as a recreational tool. During holidays Americans use their cars to travel and get away from the large cities. Nowadays, one of the best selling cars is the minivan. Moreover, this is the choice of car used by many American families. In this car can fit comfortable a family of up to seven, this car allows them to plan family trips on weekends or holidays.
Last, cars in American are affordable. For most young people in America, their first car is a second-hand car. Nevertheless, a second-hand car still a good car in America. Last year, I bought my son his first car, a Toyota Corolla with 2000 miles on it. But still running very well. Most likely, he will be using this car until he graduates from college when he is able to buy one of his one with his money.
By way of conclusion, I am in the opinion Americans are highly dependent on automobiles for the three reasons I explained above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7625 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81724599565 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540625 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4439930593 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5714285714 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2380952381 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100353068026 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038634874103 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914522021826 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802509443647 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105010013994 0.0645574589148 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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