We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.
To what extent do you agree?
Internet, an invention that has changed the way we live our daily lives. Although the internet has numerous benefits, it has its fair share of disadvantages. However, in my opinion, these issues do not outweigh the advantages that technology has provided mankind.
The usage of technology has enabled man to lead a comfortable lifestyle. It has brought people closer to each other, even if they are physically far away. In the older days, writing a letter was the only form of communication available, which would take two to three weeks for delivery. Social networking has helped in bringing people from different walks of life together, where they can share their views, opinions and learn about other cultures. Shopping online for clothes, groceries, movie tickets, paying of electricity bills etc. is just one click away.
Technology has indeed been a boon for the human beings. However, it poses a threat to confidentiality of personal information. All social media websites require you to fill your personal data. There have been many instances of information theft from such social media companies. But, these issues can be prevented if proper measures are taken adopted. People should be responsible while handling their confidential data. Government can implement rules and regulations to help prevent security breaches.
In conclusion, technological advancement has undoubtedly helped in the progress of mankind. The issues possessed by security of personal information can be overlooked to a certain extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns to help prevent security breaches. In conclusion, technological advancement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48523206751 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94156686309 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683544303797 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4537745115 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.2222222222 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1666666667 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147175096573 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388756625444 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366699440233 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931098577829 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476760298953 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.67 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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