food travels thousand of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat local produce food. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many consumers eat foods that has been traveled thousands of miles away from their producers. Some people opine that it will be good for the economy if people only eat locally produced food. I agree with this view to a certain extent. In my opinion, consumption of regional foods will create jobs in local economy and help the environment, but if people only eat local produce food, they will have fewer choices.
To begin with, local foods are beneficial not only for the economy but for the environment as well. Primarily, transportation of internationally grown foods require burning more fossil fuel and this is detrimental to the environment. Locally grown foods are rich in proteins and nutrition and free from artificial added preservatives. Regional food are much healthier and fresher as it does not consume transit facilities unlike the processed grocery food items hence there will be massive reduction in the consumption of fuel if people start preferring locally grown food. Thus, it will be beneficial for the environment. Furthermore, many people get employment in this field. Small farmers have a chance to expand globally and it increase the overall economy progression of the country. People will prosper commercially as the demand for local and regional products would remain high withstanding competition from overseas.
On the other hand, eating locally produced foods alone is not viable option because there is a limit to the kind of food that can be grown in each place. For instances fruits such as apples and grapes can only be grown in cold climates. Likewise, there are so many vegetables that only grown in hot climates. There are many regions that are not suitable for cultivation. If people eat only what is available in their region, thus their choices of foods will be limited.
To conclude, if people give preference to the local produce, it will certainly benefit the environment and the local economy. Even so, in my opinion, consuming locally cultivated food alone is not a viable option because it will extremely limit the food choice people have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 733, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...have a chance to expand globally and it increase the overall economy progression of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, so, thus, well, even so, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11884057971 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72160793621 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504347826087 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1796824669 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9473684211 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398639018852 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132839480121 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100417120933 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276677436764 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923272929257 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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