All over the worl, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem effects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
In the 21st century, there are lots of problems and issues that need to be solved. Alongside them, obesity is a major problem among both generations. This essay intends to analyze some of the reasons of this phenomenon and suggest some ways to ameliorate the situation.
One of the reasons many people are obese is that they eat junk food, like hamburgers, chips or fried chicken. The major harm of this kind of food to people is that they keep plenty of oil which is not digested. As a result people who tend to have fast food are likely to become overweight. The solution for the government is to increse tax on this kind of unhealthy food. By imposing extra tax the rate of obesity could significantly decrese.
Furthermore, a lack of exercise can lead people to get extra weight. When people are doing some exercise the blood circulates well and digesting system does its task better. Unfortunately, people are used to effortless life and reluctant to do any exercise. When they realize getting overweight, they start taking drugs and diets to become thinner which could also have side effects to other organs. Employers should let their workers to have walks at lunchtime. People who know the consequences of this problem should propagate other people to have healthy lifestyle.
Another cause of this can be rising stress on people. Although stress is to less belame, it has a huge contribution on obesity. It has become very tough for people to avoid being stressed. Stress can destroy the mindfulness in which we do not pay attention the amount and type of food we are consuming which is also a factor of obesity. The way forward to tackle the problem could be to encourage people to take up activities which help them relieve stress sucha as yoga classes, doing their favourite hobby in free time and getting enough sleep. They can alleviate this process.
To sum up, obesity is an urgent problem in this era. Unless we take neseccary actions, it could be irreversable issue. Everybody should look after and be careful to their own health, otherwise, new and new kinds of illnesses can appear in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, kind of, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81471389646 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5373363718 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564032697548 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6713162361 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8260869565 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9565217391 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26086956522 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230887227543 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694210481709 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560357191103 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139282151593 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587952462796 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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