Distance-learning programs have gained great popularity with an increasing number of people finding it more convenient than going to the universities or colleges. Although this approach is an alternative to attending lectures in person, I think it is less effective.
Distance-learning programs have gained great popularity with an increasing number of people finding it more convenient than going to the universities or colleges. Although this approach is an alternative to attending lectures in person, I think it is less effective.
The first reason is that students on these programs may not get satisfied leaning outcomes. As there is no interaction between students and lecturers, students cannot ask questions. Consequently, they may misunderstand about some concepts. Besides, assignments or quizzes that the university provides to their students will not be given in distance-learning programs, so students on this program cannot get feedbacks about their academic results.
In addition, students who conduct online study might be distracted by external factors. Unlike face-to-face lectures, online courses are based on the internet. So students taking it may be affected by unrelated websites, and thus lose concentration. They have to stay focus on the lecture video with no supervision, and if they failed to do so, self-evidently their efficiency would get lower. Therefore, taking an online-program is less effective for students unless they have strong self-control ability.
Many students might think going to universities or colleges inconvenient, so they take online courses which enable them to study in any time and at any place.This benefits many people who want to study and meanwhile do their things, but I believe it would be better for students to be enrolled in universities for they can be learn more efficiently and have better understanding of academic knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...m to study in any time and at any place.This benefits many people who want to study ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59036144578 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26731942173 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.8091726941 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317614903386 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132434928058 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.217050334625 0.0667982634062 325% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301907164907 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.385607937935 0.056905535591 678% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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