Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. some think it is good, while others think it is a has disadvantages. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion?
People have different views about the sponsoring of sports by the companies for the purpose of advertisement. Although this approach has some drawbacks, It appears that it could be more beneficial.
At the outset, advertising through sports events could have some cons as it might be used for endorsing unethical products, such as liquor, tobacco. It could be harmful for people, who are easily swayed by this kind of endorsements. Moreover, it has been witnessed that sales of products and services largely depend on the public-image of the players. Put simply, if the peak performance is not displayed by the sportsperson, the impact of this could be seen on the sales graph. To exemplify, companies like to hire extraordinary players, to enhance their sales. Given the above explanation, it is advocated by some people that sponsoring of sports event is by no means the best way for the advertising.
On the other hand, numerous benefits can be taken if sports tournaments are sponsored by companies. Firstly, better concentration might be given on the sports by the players, due to the monetary benefits given by the companies, which are sponsoring the events, that results in high-performance in games. Secondly, sports accessories can be obtained, through sponsorship-contracts which might be impossible because of their high prices, such as sports shoes and dresses. Taken an example of Indian cricket team sponsor 'Biju' that is bearing all the expenses of the required accessories of all the players. Therefore, it would appear that the sports team can take the advantages of monetary benefits given by their sponsor companies.
In conclusion, while some demerits of sponsoring sports for advertising are. Exist, I believe the merits as far more as compared to the former.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2543554007 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10134281938 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9977777092 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163335599553 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627553763567 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626957759253 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117990669676 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275746080013 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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