Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Every human beings lie to everyone, in every sec and every minute. I, believe feel that keeping truth is better than hurting someone. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay. First of all, telling truth hurts the sentiment easily, which makes them believe he or she is lying even after hearing the truth because their heart not willing to accept the truth. Every person in the world they wants to hear good compliment about themselves, which makes them feel better or say, it makes them happy. In other hand, if someone say something negative about them or give them bad compliment about their work, they often get upset. In result, they tend to think other person is rude or they don't like them, that is why they are commenting to them. For instances, in office, if boss praise one of the co-worker in their office, he/she might do go job, because he/she thinks that if he/she doesn't work well, next time their mentor will not give compliment to them. That is why, sometimes it is good to hide the truth to have productive relationship with others. Secondly, lies flies like speed, which makes people hard to distinguish between truth and lie. Mostly, people trust the person who lie to them and if someone say truth, they dislike them. My own experience is the example of this. About few years ago, I went vacation with my close friends of high school. Though, I have sent invitation to all, it seems that one of mine closest haven't got the invitation. Later, she came to know about the vacation trip from one of her friend. She seem devastated because she thought I excluded her. My friend heard a different story about me being bad person to her. When I try to explained to her about the invitation, she was not ready to trust me. Further, when I try to tell her the truth she feels that I am lying. So, later I decided to tell her lie. In conclusion, I strongly believe that not telling the truth is a saver side to keep up the relation. This is because it takes time to heal the wound, and because it makes your life turbulent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...e truth. Every person in the world they wants to hear good compliment about themselve...
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Line 1, column 719, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d to think other person is rude or they dont like them, that is why they are comment...
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Line 1, column 916, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...b, because he/she thinks that if he/she doesnt work well, next time their mentor will ...
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Line 1, column 1466, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... all, it seems that one of mine closest havent got the invitation. Later, she came to ...
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Line 1, column 1569, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'seems'.
Suggestion: seems
...cation trip from one of her friend. She seem devastated because she thought I exclud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48677248677 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22796718973 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.203812108 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0989742918261 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339779945451 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381622626816 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989742918261 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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