TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends
This a world that everyone wants to overuse your kindness and accuracy which we live here. making friend is one of the most significant ability that everyone should have. some people believes that it's better to have more friends than having less friend. some other don't accept this conviction. personally, I am of the opinion that properly making friend is more important, and the number of our friends isn't very important. I believe in this way for some main reasons which I will describe them below.
To begin with, honesty is the remarkable charectristic that everyone doesn't have. it makes us to narrow our friendship's circle. To make it clear, dishonesty causes us not to trust our friends, and it builds circumstances for us to always wait for a impact which our friends made. For inferre it in our lives, I'm telling an example of my experience. when I was freshman at university, I have a very close friend named Amirabbas. we always told to each other about everthing happened in our life or in the university. Once I was in a relationship with one of our university guys that I didn't want to everyone know. I splited up with that guys since Amirabbas told everyone in the university, Although I stressed him not to tell anybody.
Furthermore, if you have a small number of friends, it makes you to handle your friendships as well as you can. that is because of that you would spend more time to communicate with them. it enables you to listen and care about their problems, and if you spend more time for doing this, you would be closer to them, and it makes your relationships stronger. To illustrate this, I have lots of friends when I was at highschool, but when I went to collage, there are a few persons who were my friends. Last claim which I declared it happened exactly in my life, and I feel that I am closer to my friends now.
In conclusion, it is better to have less friends but having right ones. that is because of the reasons which I explained above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56460674157 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63748339267 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508426966292 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1732892578 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.380952381 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9523809524 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203964071433 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612599803945 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547843176906 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111664141748 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605578124061 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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