A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
Give contact details for when you are away
Give instructions about how to care for your pet
Describe other household duties.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jay,
Hello! I hope things are fine with you, first of all, I am very thankful for your care to look after my house and pet in my absence. Now I can enjoy my holidays without any worries at all.
I am writing to let you know certain things, firstly, you can contact me on my alternative postpaid number i.e. 9897546230 as prepaid network services are unavailable here. Secondly, my pet requires special attention when I am not there, she is quite used to morning walk and like to play with neighbour's cat. Also, love to have milk, bread and biscuits in meal.
Moreover, you are required to unlock the door at 7 am as my household maid arrive at this time every day. Besides this, milk, vegetables and other grocery items are available at doorstep after ringing phone number written on the kitchen's side wall. Also, not to forget watering plants on alternate days and lock the main door at 10 pm onwards for safety reasons.
See you soon on Sunday and will have some fun together.
Regards
Alexa
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| 2019-11-29 | Prachi Agrawal | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jay, Hello! I hope things are fine with you, ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66298342541 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32361004467 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718232044199 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0224438395 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 4.34317383033 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203226967057 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064237286547 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629742554094 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110870703331 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635847433221 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.