the government should impose a fee on drivers who use their vehicles during the rush hour to help cut down on air pollution from exhausting fumes
It is a common belief that drivers should not be charged when using their vehicles at the rush hour, even though it brings much harm to environment. However, i firmly believe that imposing fee would do a lot of benefits because it can cut the number of vehicles drives on the street and protect the environment.
To begin with, implementing a rush hour fee would ease the traffic jam, diminishing some of pollution in the atmosphere. Charge will cut the personal cars. Instead, they would opt to use the alternative means of transportation. This is important because being stuck in traffic also adds appreciably to the emission of pollutants, Moreover, enforcing a fee is not only simple, but it works well. For instance, in some countries, the government introduced this fee several years ago. As a result, the residents started to share their car with each others, walk and public transports as well. Going down on the number of vehicles drives on the street at rush hour make the congestion, accidents in traffic also be down, and pollution levels have gone down as well.
On the top of that, Tax revenue from the rush hour can be used to fund of environmental or social projects. Prohibition can use this charge for improving the green environment. For example, government has been able to plant trees and flower alongside road or improve the jungles after deforestation. Not only the beauty of the landscape has been increased, but the quantity of the living standard has also been improving, especially the air pollution. In effect, rush hour fee can do much to alleviate the polluted air.
To sum up, creating this fee is the best amazing solution for many issues. for these reasons, this charge should be used commonly soon.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73913785469 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9059587052 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307280715228 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911892837269 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670764588472 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173893710399 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636027151238 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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