Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Nowadays, overpopulation is the biggest threat of the world. In metro-cities have to face the problems by the overcrowding. In this essay I will discuss the issues in metropolitan and how can governments authority and individuals tackle these problems.
There are a plethora of problems occurring by an excess of people in urban areas. Firstly, traffic congestion in advanced cities. to illustrates this, an increasing the number of people, excess use of private vehicles and government transportation. As a result of more traffic congestion, road accidents and air pollution increase. For example, one report suggests that 75% of road accidents and road rages occurred at traffic signals. Secondly, the cost of living increases because of overcrowded in big cities. To illustrates this high number of people of migrating in advanced cities for better opportunities .so they required better infrastructure and more houses. As a result, the prices of the house go high.so middle families cannot afford it.
To overcome the beforementioned issues firstly, governments should expand the road and construct the new flyovers. They should also construct the rail tracks under the cities. These solutions will help to reduce traffic congestion. Secondly, municipalities should develop better infrastructure and new build the new houses. They should provide government house facilities at a low price so middle families can afford it.
To conclude, urban areas people have to face many problems by overpopulation.it creates traffic congestion, high cost of living, air pollution and many more. So governments and persons should take immediate steps to stop overpopulation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5905511811 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22210843454 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5489038373 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1111111111 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134795025944 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372706713175 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570279647657 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913651748099 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658539739356 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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