Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.
Over the last couple of years, people are leading a sedentary lifestyle due to various reasons. This essay will state the reasons for inactive lifestyle wand few possible solutions to change the lifestyle.
On the one hand there is ample evidence that depicts that people are leading a deskbound and inactive life. The central reason behind this is twofold, firstly, we all are living in a competitive world. Due to the competition, people have less time for their wellbeing as they have to extend their working hours and work on weekends. Secondly, technology has played a vital role in making people inactive. Compared to yesteryear, today at a click of button we have cabs and food available. People do not have to walk to the nearest taxi stand as they have online cab services available at door steps. Similarly, people do not cook food at home as they prefer to order food online which is easy and affordable. To illustrate, a recent empirical research by Oxford University demonstrates that around 30% of people globally suffer from obesity and other health related issues as they do not indulge in physical activity. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that people today more and more people are leading an inactive lifestyle due to work schedule and because of use of technology.
In order to mitigate the above situation, there are few possible solutions that can help people to change their lifestyle. Corporates can offer gymnasium facility to their employees in their office premises or offer discount coupons of nearby health clubs. Similarly, government in association with famous artists can drive several campaigns showcasing the benefits of leading an active life. For example, Indian Prime Minister Mr. Narendra Modi in spite of his busy schedule performs yoga for an hour daily and shares his videos with citizens to motivate them. To illustrate further, an extensive study by Oxford University showed that over 50% of people actively participate in campaigns that are addressed by famous artists. Thus, it is possible to state beyond doubt that initiatives and campaigns will create public awareness.
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that by creating awareness and showcasing the benefits of leading a fit and healthy lifestyle will make people change their attitude.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent empirical research'.
Suggestion: recent empirical research
... is easy and affordable. To illustrate, a recent empirical research by Oxford University demonstrates that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will make people change their attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17287234043 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65153972497 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55585106383 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5434377078 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.055555556 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123233830818 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400661730633 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241255977039 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727353326762 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259034704611 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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