Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time.
Do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, children education increase day by day, that's why children have not much time to do some other gaming activities. I totally agree with the given statement.
In the one hand, government should tackle this type of issues also include playing activity as a subject. Furthermore, Teenager too much active in the twenty century. They usually used electronics items such as play station and mobile. Result, they involve many unresolved diseases. Some parents thought that if our children just focus on education not involve in leisure activity,
On the other hand, one important point is if children involve physical activity they rapidly improve in education as well as build up confidence which we were expecting. In addition to it, Parental involvement must be their also they should provide a healthy environment to children and watch them with eagle's eye.
In conclusion, I would like to say that, children should have involve in leisure activity they automatically boost in academic career as well as mental and physical growths.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23391812865 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66356133956 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66081871345 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0296408307 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220675799783 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793711402809 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389282176966 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12963824417 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100046530442 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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