Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime
some people who have been in prison become good citizen later, and it is often argued that they are best people to talk to teenagers about dangers of commiting a crime.
it is thought by many people that ex-prisoner s can change themselves and become a productive, normal member of society. I do agree with this idea which opportunities should be given them to prove themselves and clear their negative backgrounds. also to some extend I think they are best option to talk to teenagers about consequences of criminal life.
I believe that criminals in particular juveniles have right to return to society , on the other side society should accept them . but before returning to society, I think that some training are needed to rehabilitate them and prepare them for a new life. Furthermore, some measures should be taken to tackle the social exclusion of offenders. Without any training, most of them go stray and take part in criminal acts again. All of them is government' responsibility to allocate more fund and recruit professionals staff to reform and rehabilitate them. In my view, education is effective deterrent to ex-convict are able to live like other citizens and find a paid employment.
I also agree with this idea that those who have experience of being behind bars are best option to talk to teenagers about the dangerous of criminal life because they speak from experience. teenagers are reluctant to accept paternal guidance. Although , criminals can be useful to advice teenagers, sometimes they know legal loopholes and in other words they are completely dangerous to be in touch youngester. In my opinion, it is too much better making educational movies about results of a criminal lifestyle and what life in prison is really like.
In conclusion, people with a criminal record should accepted by society to adapt themselves to life outside prison. it is vitally important that criminals should be rehabilitated to avid anti- social behavior. they could be useful to advice teenagers about crime and criminal life style since adolescents are unwilling to act on their parents'advice but this connection maybe have its own negative results because not all criminals turn their lives around and become good citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, i think, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18528610354 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81726001303 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536784741144 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5574320434 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319642844707 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109996214857 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210090645327 0.0667982634062 315% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281766925392 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.32095953242 0.056905535591 564% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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