Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Presents are a token of love and affection to loved ones and family members. Although, Certain individuals agree to the statement that giving gifts to their family members and loved ones is an emotional outlet to express care, others believe that there are different other ways to show their liking and concerns. In my opinion, I do believe that people can convey their affection and consideration in a plethora of different ways.
A certain set of people give their consent that the best way to express their warmth and sympathy for someone is by helping them both psychologically and financially as well as compassionately caring for them in their difficult times as this will have a deeper impact and will be treasured for life. Expensive gifts and presents have limited shelf life and do not symbolize true feelings. To elucidate, if a person who is in a big financial crisis, helping them monetarily and supporting them during their hardships is the best way to express the care and affection
Several people believe that giving gifts is the most significant way of showing their deep affection and fondness. Gifts are tangible and will persistently remind them about the true feeling and sentiments. Moreover, to surprise someone on special occasions with a gift one requires for a very long time will be appreciated and adored. In fact, the youngster has an opinion that giving luxurious gifts to their friends portrays a stronger bond. To illustrate, if a child is gifted a bicycle on his birthday, he will remember and love that gift for lifetime.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that to help someone in difficult times or to take care and express the love to a person in need is the best way of expressing affection and true feeling, moreover it will be appreciated and remembered for entire life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st way to express the care and affection Several people believe that giving gifts...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...preciated and remembered for entire life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, in fact, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92833876221 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76585787071 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504885993485 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.891246086 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247349190988 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984107581136 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743727413066 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152276203094 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638895456475 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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