Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Humans have changed their accommodation by arrival of concrete and steel during the recent decades. Although living in skyscrapers has many advantages such as their facilities and they are relatively safe and secure, traditional houses’ benefits overweigh artificial places’ merits which can make people isolated and depressed.
On the one side, living in towers which have a huge number of floors has many benefits. Firstly, some facilities such as gyms and pools help people to keep fit without going out. In other words, this is a neat way to scape from hustle and bustle of the city when occupants come home. Secondly, as safety and security play a prominent role in our life and these complex apartments have them by safeguards, CCTV systems, and other technologies, people can feel no dangerous happening can threaten their calmness and family. For instance, fire extinguisher set in blocks and aisles can protect the building from a disaster.
On the flip side, apartments which are over clouds can keep residents away from the society in especial neighbors and give them loneliness. Not only children, but also adults can be adversely affected. children need friends to play and their best friends can be found in the neighborhoods. also, adults require communication and people who live in the next door can act as even their family members, but residents do not tend to get in touch with the neighbors because of many facilities and in the long term they may feel that they are cast away. For instance, if you needed food materials to cook dinner and you did not some and could not access any shopping, you would borrow it from your neighbor. but now you can buy it from the store that is available in the apartment.
In conclusion, skyscrapers employ many facilities which are readily available and can make life easier. but one of the most significant drawbacks of these constructions is they make people isolated and unhappy.
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04307692308 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72535150548 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.582970229 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.266666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150122338879 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456710708044 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416197670736 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959985595732 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173507413369 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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