Does socializing on the internet have more advantages or disadvantages ?
Smart phones and socialising platforms on the internet is booming nowadays. People are preferring to communicate through this medium rather than having it face-to-face. In my opinion, it has a few pros but the cons of it is more.
First of all, In some point of view it has some advantages.The main benefit is that people can easily find their old school friends. As, people drift apart after completing their schools or colleges, Internet provides an option to stay in contact no matter how far they might be. To illustrate, one of my friend has moved over the UK but i recently found him due to Facebook. Moreover, a person can find somebody who has the same interest and they can have a larger group of friends, with whom, they can interact at any time and any place.
On the other hand, communicating on the internet has more drawbacks. The main problem is that the quality of friendship due to this technology has decreased dramatically. This is evident during times of calamity, as there would not be any social friend who would come to help. Secondly, due to this equipments, people also face problems related to health. For an example, according to The Times of India, it was reported that 30% children of India face the problem of eye strain or back pain from a young age.
Lastly, this platforms are not safe enough and people have complained about fake friends due to whom they have lost a lot of money and belongings. Internet is also a good place for people who want to hurt others by their rude behavior and hurtful comments. As they can hide behind the ananomity of the web.
In recapitulation, internet socialising platform is like a virtual world and people are disengaging from the real word. It does have it’s benefits but as my point of view, this virtual socialising is going to affect very badly in near future to the humans as well as the society as whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ho would come to help. Secondly, due to this equipments, people also face problems r...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eir rude behavior and hurtful comments. As they can hide behind the ananomity of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73952095808 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62171013851 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5190380269 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152391948505 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484406585 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479516805011 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889602677334 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311741642815 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.