In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs. what are the causes of this difference?what will be the parental roles in future?
One of the most topical issues in modern society is that the mother and father job are contrast for children.This has become serious issue.Furthermore,what should do parents for children in forthcoming.In this essay I will examine the reasons why this is happening and give some solutions.
There are two main reasons why parents role are different for children.First and foremost one reason for this difference is that majority of people living below poverty line.For instance, mens are working as a labour, so they early at morning leave home for searching work as well as the come back at after the sunset.Whole day spend in working for their home.This kind of man's wife are handle their children. Second reason is that some people live in fuddy-duddy style.That sort of people believe,my work is only earning money and my wife responsible for my home making.Children care responsibility of my wife like children home work, children eating, children health and children sleep all these kind of responsibilities of women.
However, future will become a bright because day by day world convert in modern culture.In modern culture men and women believe, we are both responsible for our children care and children behaviour so they both concern for children.Furthermore, in modern culture women are also earning money.They go for job in companies and also they run business.If man come first at home, then men do household chores.Apart from that, men also lay to child for completing home work.Sometimes men cook lunch and dinner.
In conclusion,this is a topic which is very relevant want to modern society.If both men and women implement this policy, it will provide a better life for future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2202166065 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21111777311 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.603584172 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 289.2 106.682146367 271% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.4 20.7667163134 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.4 7.06120827912 374% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104269451049 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734200629878 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671097360971 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084274835271 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657247012106 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 50.2224549098 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.3001002004 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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