You just moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend.
Write a letter to your friend:
• why you move there
• Compare your new place to the previous place
• Where do you live now
Dear Sam,
I hope you have been doing well. It has been a while since we last met when I came at your place to have dinner. The reason why I am writing this letter is to tell you that I have shifted to Jaipur last week. I know the decision to move was sudden and for that I want to apologize as I never got the chance to tell you about it earlier.
As you know, I applied for the post of senior consultant in ABC Ltd. 10 days back I received an email from the Human Resource manager of the company, which mentioned that I have been selected for that job. Followed by an email, I received a call from the manager who asked me to join immediately as they had an important client to address, for which they didn’t had any resource. This was a tremendous opportunity to boost my career and for this reason I had to join on an urgent basis.
I will be free at the weekend and you should come to visit it. The city is absolutely amazing and you will love the transportation over here. They came up with metro train service, which we both know will take at least a decade to get introduced in our hometown. Also, the infrastructure is quite fascinating with better amenities available when compared to our old place. Moreover, the night life is something which is not be missed and you will thank me later for that. Additionally, the kind of experience one can have by visiting local places and learning about their culture is something I am looking forward to have with you.
As a stated earlier in this letter, I have transferred to Jaipur. I live in the outskirts of the city in the area named Jagatpura as the rent is cheap in this part of the town. But when it comes to peace, nothing can beat this place. Working throughout the day gives way too much stress but after coming to home, the place gives me far more pleasure by providing silence and a way to live a balanced life. I will email you the address before you leave for my place.
I know I didn’t told you this in person and for that I would like to make up to you. I will look forward to hearing from you and say hello to your parents on my behalf.
Best wishes,
Hemant
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-05 | wildhog.tejwani@gmail.com | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 615, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...lture is something I am looking forward to have with you. As a stated earlier in t...
^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 91, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...or that I would like to make up to you. I will look forward to hearing from you a...
^
Line 21, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...say hello to your parents on my behalf. Best wishes, Hemant
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, at least, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.03092783505 462% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 32.9175257732 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 26.3917525773 220% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 937.175257732 188% => OK
No of words: 409.0 206.0 199% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31295843521 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 3.78020617076 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38778312261 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 127.690721649 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528117359413 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 552.6 290.88556701 190% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6804123711 173% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6869985164 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1818181818 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5909090909 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255397081066 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769971927963 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596676914228 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157829287307 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811430780682 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.