Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young. Use reasons and examples to support your answer.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rching a better opportunities for living . Now everything has been changed .We tra...
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...living . Now everything has been changed .We travel a lot easier with faster cars ...
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...ing place at the beginning of the week .All of this without any prohibitions or res...
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...ofoundly influenced by my own experience .Education abroad is also possible as par...
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...oundly influenced by my own experience .Education abroad is also possible as part as free...
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... youth can entertain themselves with so many different sources .To go to a concert of the favo...
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...mselves with so many different sources .To go to a concert of the favourite west...
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...ces .To go to a concert of the favourite west rock group ,watching the newest Hol...
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...ncert of the favourite west rock group ,watching the newest Hollywood movies on ...
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... different type of entertain because of the develop of the new technologies .They had only ...
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...e of the develop of the new technologies .They had only coffeterias or if they wa...
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...of the develop of the new technologies .They had only coffeterias or if they want t...
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... technologies .They had only coffeterias or if they want to know more ,they neede...
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...offeterias or if they want to know more ,they needed to be a whole day in the lib...
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...ormation they needed. Thus, for us today is a lot easier than before. In the...
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...e above mentioned reasons I believe that the life in our country is better .We tr...
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... that the life in our country is better .We travel more often and we could have ...
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...hat the life in our country is better .We travel more often and we could have ex...
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...life in our country is better .We travel more often and we could have excellent t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78412698413 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63734849449 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625396825397 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.718469011 48.9658058833 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.7 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.6045352989 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158739886909 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659048947363 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310426008443 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968393955262 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208912816483 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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