THE GRAPHS BELOW COMPARE THE AVERAGE WEEKLY EARNINGS OF MALE AND FEMALE GRADUATES AND NON GRADUATES
The graph contrast the weekly payment between men and women who are graduated or non graduated among different ages in pound,In details the group of men between forty to fifty nine who are educated were able to catch seven hundred pound for each week that is much more than others .
As chart indicates ,The lowest money arrived to people who are not graduated between sixteen to nineteen by two hundred pound,furthermore,The highest salary which is seven hundred gave to graduated men between ages of forty to fifty nine,what is more,The group of non educated men from thirty to fifty nine earning approximately five hundred pound every week,Also in the category of women in the chart which shows that in the age of twenty five to fifty nine in graduated we have the same prices fee which is four hundred pound,surprisingly in both graduated or non graduated women and men among ages of twenty to twenty four the weekly earning is equal near to three hundred.
In surmise men earning much more than women as chart illustrates ,moreover ,people who are graduated were able to catch more money in contrast by non educated,also ages from forty to fifty nine have the peak-est earning ,In comparing group of sixteen to nineteen have lowest one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in contrast, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87264150943 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70212979578 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448113207547 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 22.4926829268 311% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.444510661 43.030603864 433% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.333333333 112.824112599 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.6666666667 22.9334400587 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6666666667 5.23603664747 395% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243753420871 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184882464507 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233440603367 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184882464507 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233440603367 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 13.2329268293 278% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 61.2550243902 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.3012195122 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.15 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.9970731707 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.