some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them
discuss both views and give your opinion
Friendship has been always considered to be one of the most sacred relationships. Hence when it comes to choosing friends, people have different views. Plethora of people tend to believe that it is better to choose friends who always share the same opinions; however, another majority think it is more benefitial to have friends that often disagree with them. In my opinion, I would rather agree with the second view.
Embarking upon the first view, it can be attributable to various reasons. Some people love to feel themselves always agreed with, they hate to be corrected, or even told that they have a wrong opinion. As they have some sort of high ego, and want to be praised for their always correct perspectives. While, others think it is easier for them to have friends that share the same interests and hobbies, rather than arguing on what to do and what not to do. Furthermore, others adore the feeling of their friends always supporting their ideas in different discussions and arguments, especially with strangers.
On the other hand, majority of people believe that friendship is not just to have people in your life to blindly follow and agree with. These people have a wider cognitive and awareness, and know that listening to different opinions is healthy and enriches the one's knowledge. Besides, each person has a unique life experience, that aided in forming his/her opinions, and it is always better to share and brainstorm different ideas and opinions, rather than to just follow blindly. In addition to that, good friends should correct their friends when they commit mistakes, and not simply go with the flow. Even more, participating in new activities can be much more amusing than just doing the same things a one is used to do.
In conclusion, although it is easier to have friends with the same opinions and mentality; however, I strongly believe that it is healthier to have friends with different and various perspectives. And, as a matter of fact, all me true life-long friends, definetly, usually disagree with me in many opinions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
Friendship has been always considered to be one of the most sacred...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e one of the most sacred relationships. Hence when it comes to choosing friends, peop...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, as a matter of fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9855907781 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64055901007 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50144092219 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5380592884 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45887520678 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143360681968 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112407032406 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299997257377 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876315364939 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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