Essay topics:
Some people think being away from friends can contribute to a good relationship, since they will cherish our relationship. Others think we should stay with friends, which is beneficial to our relationship, and being away from friends will destroy the bond. Which one do you prefer?
We have to make decisions every day. And most of them are quick decisions, whether it is as small as placing a coffee order or as big as deciding which apartment to hire. The leaders, too, are forced to make decisions now and then. Some people even assert that the quick decision making of leaders is one of the characteristics of a great leader. I fully agree with this idea for a few reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
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Essays by user MR.YANG24
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- Do you agree or disagree with the statement: University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study. 73
- Some people think being away from friends can contribute to a good relationship, since they will cherish our relationship. Others think we should stay with friends, which is beneficial to our relationship, and being away from friends will destroy the bond 40
- It is better to work for business owned by someone else than to work for the business of one’s own family 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decision quickly when a leader takes too much time to make decisions he will be seen as ineffective to the people he lead 7
- It is important to read or watch the news presented by people whose views are similar to your own or read or watch the news presented by those whose views are different from your own. 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 43.0788530466 16% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 52.1666666667 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 358.0 1977.66487455 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 82.0 407.700716846 20% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36585365854 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.00921669843 4.48103885553 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51101085039 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 61.0 212.727598566 29% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.743902439024 0.524837075471 142% => OK
syllable_count: 116.1 618.680645161 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2136337233 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.070348652872 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337563072555 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275831854038 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070348652872 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 86.8835125448 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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