Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Advancement in science and everyday evolving technology is enabling the scientists to do more automation and simplify the regular work. In this regard few people think that robots are of great significance for the development of the future, while the others consider them as to have ill effects on society. I think any new technology will have pluses and minuses, and it is on us to focus on the larger benefits and ignore or decrease the drawbacks.
The young working people today do not enjoy doing a mundane job, they always look forward to have innovation or challenges at work, and use their full potential to come up with new ideas and implement them. So the mundane jobs, which are process oriented and has specific set of rules or instructions to follow can be easily done in higher precision by programmed automated machines without getting bored or tired. Man-less ticket counters at cinemas, loading/ unloading of goods in large warehouses, automated counting machines in banks are few of the everyday examples where robots are best suited. With this the future generation will have more creative jobs and not robotic or routine.
Nevertheless, with the machines replacing humans the chances of people becoming lazy and irresponsible are higher. Also, since the machines are capable of doing the same job as human with higher accuracy without stopping, there will be unemployment and many would be jobless.
Altogether, with technology in the future, it is undeniable that machines will replace man in all the sectors wherever possible making human life simpler. In my opinion, quality of job is more satisfactory than the quantity of work. With humans concentrating on newer ideas it would keep them motivated and stimulated all the time. Thereby, robots are essential for tomorrow’s mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
Advancement in science and everyday evolving technology is enabling the sci...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...a mundane job, they always look forward to have innovation or challenges at work, and u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, as to, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19661016949 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78151240535 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.558482661 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189179577596 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717181570019 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801607543699 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113725662996 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628973184752 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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