You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
.correct the information in the article
. explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing this letter to explain to the editor of the magazine.Two days ago, I was read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some incorrect information of this tour that I prepare to travel on my holiday. I registered this tour on two months ago.
In the article, it is note day and time start move is 5:00 p.m 15th september, but when I saw my schedule that note exactly is 6;00 P.M 16th september.
It is wrong department day. This leads to many people and me who prepare visit and want to go these tour coud miss these journey. They could miss plans of their of their family days learn of their children and do not arrange their work before and after that. It includes me too.
I suggest that you should again notice about this situation in new an magazine or call to their phone. Day and time of tour for consumers understand exact information that they need.
I hope I will hear from you about new information soon.
All the best,
Tiffany.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Two
...o explain to the editor of the magazine.Two days ago, I was read an article in an i...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...my schedule that note exactly is 6;00 P.M 16th september. It is wrong departmen...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of their'.
Suggestion: of their
...ss these journey. They could miss plans of their of their family days learn of their children and...
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Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...gain notice about this situation in new an magazine or call to their phone. Day an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51366120219 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42243586641 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.035700369 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0909090909 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221837380705 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652382060597 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121022194201 0.0603063233224 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119939671419 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126106285316 0.0580467560999 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.