Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should retire and stop working. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Everything has its positive and negatives and so has the technology. While some people believe that technology is deteriorating human lives, many believe that it would not have made life any better. In this essay, I will explore both the ideas and support the latter part.
Firstly, Technology has eradicated the human touch from most of the work. There are many works which are done for a great experience, shopping is one of them. Before the launch of e-commerce business (online shopping) there was great human touch to the products which worker would sell to the customers. Although shopping online is quite comfortable but the certainty of the quality of the product is dicey till it is not received by the customer. Secondly, it would not be wrong saying that technology eased the life of human race but gave invitation to new diseases forms as well. Researchers have confirmed that in coming years, there will be an increment in bone related diseases (spondylolysis, arthritis etc.) due to the overuse of technology.
Technology has advanced human life by making difficult and unapproachable things easy and within the reach of mankind. For instance, Whatssapp, face timing, Google maps are some technology-based services that has eased human life. There is almost no area which is untouched with technology. Technology has not only aided product and services but also advanced medical science to find cure for many fatal diseases. As an example, DNA finger printing is a very basic requirement for the cure of many genetic disease. Earlier it used to take 6-12 months to sequence a DNA sample and it would cost someone an arm and a leg. However, after the advancement in technology, DNA sequencing can be done in couple of hours and interestingly in same amount of money you would spend for a burger.
In conclusion, I would say that knife was made to cut the vegetables but we human used it to kill other human beings. Similarly, technology has some ill effects on our society, but I believe that it has contributed positively to mankind. It is we who must decide to use technology to improve our lives or destroy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...at experience, shopping is one of them. Before the launch of e-commerce business onlin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77081209961 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552777777778 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5088834013 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0447071700225 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.013711190426 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212664599658 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0342502490141 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283073620922 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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